Prologue [The Frenzy Hero]

Hello if there’s some mistake in the translation feels free to point it out by using comment, thanks and enjoy.

Editor: Oscuras

Proofreading: Sensei


[Welcome Hero from another world. Please, I want you to save this world from the demon king] (unknown)

Suddenly I heard the hoarse voice of an unfamiliar old man.

After hearing the voice I came to my senses and looked around.

Then I noticed myself standing on top of a strange pattern.

[Where am I….?] (Iori)

[This is “Leytesha,” the world different from the one that you came from, Hero] (unknown)

The hoarse voice answered the question which was unconsciously being spurted out from my mouth.

I raised my eyes in the direction of the voice and there was everyone regardless of age or sex who wore the clothes like the noble of the Renaissance era lined up in a row.

The one who answered my question was the middle-aged man who was wearing a crown and stood out the most among the group.

[Ley…..tesha]

[Yes, currently Leytesha is on the brink of destruction because of the demon king]

I stood dumbfounded while the middle-aged man continued his speech.

Wait, don’t just push forward the story selfishly. The words do not come out because of my dry throat.

[Because of this the kingdom decided to summon a hero in order to slay the demon king] (King)

Am I having a transient dream? Or am I not able to distinguish between reality and delusion? The middle age man was saying something but the words did not get into my confused head.

However, strangely I was able to understand what he was going to say.

[You are the hero….] (King)

First of all, let’s calm down

I try to ignore the speech from that man, trying to calm my confused head

And trying to remember what happen a few minutes ago

I remember clearly what happen at that moment.

I wonder… what had happened to me?

I laughed loudly unintentionally while holding my aching head.

[Are you listening to what I’m saying?!] (King)

I feel upset as my sight was cast down on the ground.

Suddenly there was a shout came from the middle age man.

I look up to the direction of the harsh shout. In front of my eyes, there stood a man that was wearing a black robe and was holding a cane which was embedded with a red jewel. When I look toward that man instantly my confusion disappears.

[You are in the presence of his Majesty the King! Raise your face!] (Men in black robes)

[Its fine Luser’s, the hero seems still confused and there no need to rush it] (King)

what “Luser’s”!!?

The middle age man with the red hair that was shouting at me is named Luser’s, at the same time when the rebuke word enters my ear, suddenly my thoughts went blank as if I being struck by a thunder.

–damn you, I have had it with the “hero”

At the same time my head reached its limit with the gushed memories, then I stomped the floor as if I crushing it and started running toward Luser.

[Aaaaarghhh!!!]

[wha~!?]

Toward the roar yelled by me like an animal, as Luser reacts to it

but it’s already late.

Before that guy raises his cane, I struck a blow direct to his face.

I fired a fist full of hatred directly to Luser’s face.

[Gaaah~]

Caused by the momentum, Luser is sent flying and crashes into the wall.

I pierce a glare straight at him as I was about to faint

Not yet.

This is not going to end just like that.

As I ride on top of him, I land punches.

The sound where my fist strikes the cheekbone echoes.

[Wait, Hero! what are you trying to do!?] (King)

[Arrest him quickly!!] (King)

The people around rush towards me

with a quite force, I was being held down

[Luu….seerr!!!] (Iori)

Still, I keep beating Luser.

At that time, all the emotions that were accumulated in my heart were cleared up.

[Fuck you…..only you!] (Iori)

Luser’s faints completely.

However, it not gonna end just with this.

It is not finished.

–The pain I received from him, is greater than this

As I want to land one more hit I was pinned down to the ground.

Immediately I was trying to shake off the people that pinned me down

However, for some reason, my strength does not come out.

[I won’t forget the things that you did to me!] (Iori)

Still, I struggled and extended my hand towards Luser’s

However, a dull shock runs at the back of my head

as my vision flashed I felt my strength leaving my body

[What the heck…] (unknown)

Someone among the people who arrested me said such a thing

–“What the heck” you say?

As my consciousness fades away the words enter my ear.

For such an obvious question, I answer it in my heart.

This fucking guy is my murderer.

It isn’t for the first time that I, Amatsuki Iori, am being summoned to this world.

Until several minutes ago, I was being summoned as a hero to protect this world.

Although.

In the end what was waiting for me was betrayal from my fellow companions whom I trusted

Having my arm cut off and being stabbed in the chest, I still remember everyone laughing at the dumbfounded me.

That red haired guy, Luser’s is one of them.

By murdering me the achievement for subjugating the demon king will be claimed by themselves.

When the war ends,the hero is just an obstruction.

You are already unnecessary.

While being told so by my laughing companions I was being murdered.

For some reason, I’m still alive.

I still don’t understand the reason but I’m really thankful for my luck

Because I’ve been given an opportunity to take revenge on the people who betrayed me

–I’m gonna make them regret.

Having betrayed me.

I laughed until I lost my consciousness.


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11 thoughts on “Prologue [The Frenzy Hero]

  1. “Hello if the some mistake in the translation feel free to point it out by using comment, thanks and enjoy.”
    Can we also point out the mistake in this sentence or just the translation?

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    1. feel free to do either of it.
      example:

      original text# I batman
      corrected# I’m batman

      please point out the mistake using this format, it’ll be easy for me to replace the wrong sentence or translation. thanks 😉

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  2. Original
    Welcome Hero from the another world.

    “Corrected”
    Welcome Hero from another world.

    (Unnecessary “the”)

    Original
    I come to my senses from the voice and look around.

    “Corrected”
    After hearing the voice I came to my senses and looked around.

    (Changed to past-tense to match the rest of the chapter and tried to make it sound smoother)

    Original
    This is “Leytesha”, a world different from the one that you Hero came from

    “Corrected”
    This is “Leytesha,” a world different from the one that you came from, Hero

    (Sounded weird so I moved “Hero”)

    Original
    I lift up my eyes to look up to the voice direction

    “Corrected”
    I raised my eyes in the direction of the voice

    (Replaced “voice direction” with “direction of the voice” because it sounded right also the “raised eyes” part was just personal preference)

    Original
    The one who answered my question was the middle-aged man that was wearing a crown and stands out the most among them.

    “Corrected”
    The one who answered my question was the middle-aged man who was wearing a crown and stood out the most among the group.

    (The middle-aged man is a person so “who” should be used instead of “that” also past-tense words)

    Original
    Yes,currently Leytesha is in the brink of destruction because of demon king

    “Corrected”
    Yes, currently Leytesha is on the brink of destruction because of the demon king

    (Added a space and replaced “in” to “on.” The word “brink is interchangeable with “edge” so you wouldn’t stand inside of it but rather on top of it)

    Original
    I was standing dumb in surprise while the middle-aged man keeps continuing his word.

    “Corrected”
    I stood dumbfounded while the middle-aged man continued his speech.

    (I assumed “dumbfounded” is what you were aiming for since you had a “dumb” in there when all you would have otherwise needed was the “in surprise.” “Word” could have been “words” but I felt that “speech” fit the situation better and other words were changed from present to past-tense.)

    Original
    Wait, and don’t just push forward the story selfishly. Words do not come out because of my dry throat.

    “Corrected”
    Wait, don’t just push forward the story selfishly. The words do not come out because of my dry throat.

    (Added a “the” because it seems like he tried so say the past sentence but was unable to and is currently addressing that problem. The ” and” was unnecessary)

    Original
    Because of that the kingdom decided to summon a hero in order to slay the demon king

    “Corrected”
    Because of this the kingdom decided to summon a hero in order to slay the demon king

    (Changed “that” to “this” because it is something that is currently still a problem. This actually doesn’t need to be changed as it could still be used the other way)

    Original
    In the end what was waiting for me was a betrayal from my fellow companion that I trusted

    “Corrected”
    In the end what was waiting for me was betrayal from my fellow companions whom I trusted

    (You would say “betrayal” instead of “a betrayal” and I assumed that he was referring to all of his companions not just cloak guy. Also cloak guy and companions are people so use who/whom instead of that)(the trick for knowing when to use who or whom is by using he or him. “I trusted him” = “whom I trusted”)

    I missed a very large amount of errors because I stopped less than halfway through (the last one was my first correction). I would recommend finding someone for this job specifically because while the story is still readable, at times it can have an extremely negative impact on the story as a whole.

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